There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in order to lodge about the changing
rooms
in your sports centre.
Firstly
, we have been having difficulty with locking the door,
due to
the fact that the door was completely broken.
Secondly
, windows were broken too, but it is not
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much problem because of the normal weather.
Thirdly
,
rooms
do not include enough pegs. A week ago , I spoke to our trainer about it. He
told
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that he
will
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solve
this
problem.
Nevertheless
, he did not do anything to fix
this
issue. I was extremely disappointed with
this
situation.
Also
,
i
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could not speak to you because of my tight schedule. I am displeased with the convenience of the
rooms
,i demand that you send a repairman to solve
this
problem.
Furthermore
, changing
rooms
should be reconstructed on Wednesday
this
week. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Askarova Mohinur
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The letter covers all the required points in the task.
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The structure of the letter is logical and paragraphs are appropriately used for single ideas.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • frequent user
  • specific issues
  • cleanliness
  • hygiene
  • broken facilities
  • lack of supplies
  • address the issue
  • response
  • emphasize
  • well-maintained
  • comfort
  • hygiene
  • politely
  • firmly
  • request
  • resolve
  • prompt resolution
  • discuss
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