There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: • describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • say what happened the last times you complained • explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in order to lodge about the changing

rooms

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in your sports centre.

Firstly

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, we have been having difficulty with locking the door,

due to

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the fact that the door was completely broken.

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, windows were broken too, but it is not

making

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causing

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much problem because of the normal weather.

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rooms

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do not include enough pegs. A week ago , I spoke to our trainer about it. He

told

Verb problem

said

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that he

will

Wrong verb form

would

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solve

this

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problem.

Nevertheless

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, he did not do anything to fix

this

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issue. I was extremely disappointed with

this

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situation.

Also

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Change the capitalization

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could not speak to you because of my tight schedule. I am displeased with the convenience of the

rooms

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,i demand that you send a repairman to solve

this

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problem.

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, changing

rooms

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should be reconstructed on Wednesday

this

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week. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Askarova Mohinur

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task achievement

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task achievement

The letter covers all the required points in the task.

coherence

The structure of the letter is logical and paragraphs are appropriately used for single ideas.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

frequent user
specific issues
cleanliness
hygiene
broken facilities
lack of supplies
address the issue
response
emphasize
well-maintained
comfort
hygiene
politely
firmly
request
resolve
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