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smacking is a good way to teach discipline. Do what extent do you agree or disagree?

#discipline
Some people
use
 violence whit the children and with people to teach them the wrong ,but
this
 wrong way to teach any one thing we have some special time to
use
this
 method and not anyone can
use
 it because the saints say we have a lot of kids have error to choose the good selection that what we will talk about now.
Firstly
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about
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 the hit is the government
by
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use
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 it whit the
criminal's
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criminals
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because
because if
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because if
 the government don't do
this
 the corruption will spread and they should
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give
geve
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give
this
 job to specialists ,but the smacking
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the
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 good way
th
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to
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 to teach the citizens some community don't do like
this
 they have associations help the wrongdoers by
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 them the best thing you might do when you angry.
Next
, when we
use
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person
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wrong
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 thing he will be ashamed at himself because the talk sometimes is very painful more
use
 mischief ,
furthermore
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 we can remember when we
was
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 children if the teacher hit us sometimes hate her , so we should delete
this
 way in our lives. In the end , we have many ways we can
use
 without the smacking because the person who hit don't like anyone hit him ,but we have
alot
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 of methods and I think all people disagree with
this
 idea like me the administrator is the government by road everything will be normal without any problems.
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