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Communication through text messaging and other instant forms of online communication are short and basic. Some people think this will be the death of grammar and spelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, everyone has a gadget mainly used to communicate without face meetings. It has simple characteristics
such
 as short or essential. Many
people
 think it badly impacted syntax and the alphabet’s survival. I do not agree with
this
 view because
this
 way is only used for
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. In reality, the person who implemented instant conversation is
also
 aware of the
grammar
 and spelling on formal occasions. Human activities often include a relationship involving
communication
 by phone or computer. The type is mostly simple and not formal that does not need strict
grammar
 and spelling.
For instance
, they only write OK while agreeing without overthinking the rules of language in writing form. It commonly occurs unaware to communicate things quickly occasion. In formal matters,
people
 who often do online
communication
 have still implemented the
communication
 in accordance with rules
such
 as in writing letters, proposals or speeches in meetings. It requires good
grammar
, so there is no need to worry about the survival of language on the track pattern. Most
people
 know how to place themselves when in
this
 situation. In conclusion,
people
 often choose to use basic patterns in online
communication
 that sometimes do not follow the rule’s word.
Although
 it happened, it is not mean they forget it. They are still holding on to the
grammar
 when doing the formal one in many settings
such
 as office, school, and meetings (both offline and online).
Besides
 that, a lot of information and books record the rules, so society can access the true forms easily to modify the sentences in their work.
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