Some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some
people
believe that children
must send to kindergarten when they are young, ,However
a few Add a comma
,However
people
say that it would be better if kids were homeschooled at an early age. In my ,opinion I personally think children
should be sent to kindergarten and this
essay discusses why it is a better way rather than homeschooling.
Firstly
, children
can socialise with other kids which will help them to learn many things like, how to speak, how to dance, and how to make friends. These fundamental things will improve their cognitive level. For instance
, when children
are at the home, they do not have any other persons to play with or to speak to other than their parents. However
, if they are in a group of friends they can start to do things by observing other kids.
Secondly
, people
cannot work in their homes with children
. because children
are always playful in nature. For example
, when people
work from home then
they generally have a lot of meeting through video calls, so if children
shout or play in front of a computer it would not look professional way and also
parents would not give their productivity in the office. It may cause a bad reputation in the office.
To summarise this
topic, In My ,opinion as I mentioned earlier, it is always better for children
to study in kindergarten rather than homeschooled
. I personally feel that Change the form of the verb
homeschooling
children
must be raised in such
a way that they are exposed to an environment which is more sociable so that learning becomes easy for them at an early age.Submitted by TAMIZH012 on
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