Some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some

people

believe that

children

must send to kindergarten when they are young, ,

However

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,However

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a few

people

say that it would be better if kids were homeschooled at an early age. In my ,opinion I personally think

children

should be sent to kindergarten and

this

essay discusses why it is a better way rather than homeschooling.

Firstly

,

children

can socialise with other kids which will help them to learn many things like, how to speak, how to dance, and how to make friends. These fundamental things will improve their cognitive level.

For instance

, when

children

are at the home, they do not have any other persons to play with or to speak to other than their parents.

However

, if they are in a group of friends they can start to do things by observing other kids.

Secondly

,

people

cannot work in their homes with

children

. because

children

are always playful in nature.

For example

, when

people

work from home

then

they generally have a lot of meeting through video calls, so if

children

shout or play in front of a computer it would not look professional way and

also

parents would not give their productivity in the office. It may cause a bad reputation in the office. To summarise

this

topic, In My ,opinion as I mentioned earlier, it is always better for

children

to study in kindergarten rather than

homeschooled

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homeschooling

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. I personally feel that

children

must be raised in

such

a way that they are exposed to an environment which is more sociable so that learning becomes easy for them at an early age.