At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
There
are
a large amount of population of Change the verb form
is
younger
Correct article usage
the younger
generation
compare with the proportion of older people
in several nations in
nowadays. In my opinion, I Change preposition
apply
reckons
that the advantages are more than the disadvantages with Change the verb form
reckon
this
situation and I will claim my reasons in this
essay.
Countries are tended to be vivid with a relatively high proportion of young adults
. Firstly
, young
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the young
generation
are
more likely to make progress Change the verb form
is
at
science Change preposition
in
technology
between 20 to 30 years old, which is the golden period for Correct word choice
and technology
people
to gain knowledge due to the
boosting curiosity. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, the curiosity of young
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the young
generation
can push the
social development to go forward. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, the physical condition of young adults
are
much better than Correct subject-verb agreement
is
the
Correct your spelling
that
older
Change preposition
of older
people
, with the strong body they have, they are able to caring
the old with community service. Change the verb
care
For instance
, many universities recruits
students Change the verb form
recruit
for
volunteers in terms of taking care of Change preposition
as
the
older Correct article usage
apply
people
in hospital. Finally
, since the young generation
are
the major consumers of society, the GDP can Change the verb form
is
developed
more quickly with more young Change the verb form
be developed
develop
people
.
In contrast
, there are several disadvantages with
Change preposition
to
Add an article
an aging
aging
society. It is unavoidable that older Change the spelling
ageing
people
have more health issues than the
young Correct article usage
apply
adults
on average
level. Correct article usage
an average
That is
to say, the governments have to spend a
giant figures of money on Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
the
health insurance for taking care of the old Correct article usage
apply
people
, which brings burdens and problems to the government's financial systems. Moreover
, the young generation
are
likely to pay more taxes to the governments for holding the health Change the verb form
is
insurances
running.
In conclusion, my view is that the more young Fix the agreement mistake
insurance
adults
a country have
, the more vivid society it is and the less burden the government should Correct subject-verb agreement
has
carried
.Change the verb form
carry
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