At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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are

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a large amount of population of

younger

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the younger

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generation

compare with the proportion of older

people

in several nations

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nowadays. In my opinion, I

reckons

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that the advantages are more than the disadvantages with

this

situation and I will claim my reasons in

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essay. Countries are tended to be vivid with a relatively high proportion of young

adults

.

Firstly

,

young

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the young

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generation

are

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more likely to make progress

at

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science

technology

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and technology

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between 20 to 30 years old, which is the golden period for

people

to gain knowledge due to

the

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boosting curiosity.

Therefore

, the curiosity of

young

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the young

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generation

can push

the

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social development to go forward.

Secondly

, the physical condition of young

adults

are

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much better than

the

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older

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of older

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people

, with the strong body they have, they are able to

caring

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the old with community service.

For instance

, many universities

recruits

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students

for

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volunteers in terms of taking care of

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older

people

in hospital.

Finally

, since the young

generation

are

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the major consumers of society, the GDP can

developed

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more quickly with more young

people

.

In contrast

, there are several disadvantages

with

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an aging

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aging

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society. It is unavoidable that older

people

have more health issues than

the

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young

adults

on

average

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level.

That is

to say, the governments have to spend

a

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giant figures of money on

the

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health insurance for taking care of the old

people

, which brings burdens and problems to the government's financial systems.

Moreover

, the young

generation

are

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likely to pay more taxes to the governments for holding the health

insurances

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insurance

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running. In conclusion, my view is that the more young

adults

a country

have

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, the more vivid society it is and the less burden the government should

carried

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.