Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you are doing great. I am Tajinder Singh, and am writing
this
letter to formally inform you that I lost my wedding ring during a birthday party.
My wedding band is made of 22-carat pure gold with a diamond that I bought just 3 months ago.
Last
week, I visited my friend’s house with my wife to join the celebration of his birthday. We enjoyed the party and stayed over there for more than 2 hours. After that, I also
participated in some games and gave my ring to my wife because I was not comfortable wearing it for a long time. After the party, we came back to our house. The next day, I realized that I lost my ring as I was not able to find it anywhere.
According to
the contract, it is guaranteed to compensate me for the same band price that I lost in any situation. Moreover
, I have also
attached the receipt with it.
I would be grateful if you could respond to me as soon as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
TSSubmitted by tajinder.panag on
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suitable writing tone
Ensure the tone of the letter is consistent and appropriately formal throughout, avoiding phrases like 'I hope you are doing great', which may seem too informal for the context.
logical structure
There appears to be a logical structure to the letter, but it can be improved by providing a clear sequence of events and ensuring that the explanation of the loss is more detailed.
complete response
To adhere to the task requirements more closely, make sure to offer a thorough description of the lost item and the context in which it was lost. Additionally, clearly state the action you would like the insurance company to take.
single idea per paragraph
While the letter is formatted into paragraphs with single ideas, improve cohesion by linking these ideas more explicitly and using a wider range of cohesive devices.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite