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Television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays it is widely extended to learn new information through television. It is widely believed that watching TV has a negative impact on young minds
therefore
children
 are less literate.
Moreover
,
children
 who used to read many
books
 are more educated. In my point of view,
books
 facilitate learning new things.
Firstly
,
children
 mostly spend time in kindergartens and school where they read numerous
books
. Due to
this
 activity, new neurones are created that improve the functions of the brain.
Children
 tend to learn faster and have a great vocabulary.
Furthermore
, in future, they will be less affected to have diseases
such
 as dementia and Alzheimer's disease.
Secondly
, eyesight can be impaired by watching a lot of programs on TV.
Moreover
,
children
 might want to watch the same cartoons and programs that they have watched many times
instead
 of educational programs. It is the duty of parents to keep an eye on the channels that their
children
 watch and set special limits on entertainment content. To conclude,
books
 cannot be removed by television because they are a more beneficial way to study and do not have a bad influence on scion as television has.
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