Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

REGARDING FUNDS, THE MINISTRIES ARE FOCUSING MORE ON OPEN TRANSIT RATHER THAN CONSTRUCTING NEW ROADWAYS.
HOWEVER
, BOTH HAVE THEIR OWN PROS AND CON'S. THOSE WILL BE DISCUSSED IN THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS. THE
FIRST
AND FOREMOST ADVANTAGE OF FUNDING FOR BUSLINE AND RAILWAYS IS THAT THE COMMUNITY
PEOPLE
WILL BE ABLE TO GET WIDE ACCESS TO PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION AND CREATE A COMFORT ZONE TO REACH THEIR
OFFICE
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OR WORKPLACES.
FOR EXAMPLE
, HYDERABAD IS A BUSY AREA SO INCREASING BUSES WILL ALLOW PUPILS TO GO IN TIME FOR THEIR DESTINATION.
MOREOVER
, IMPROVING THE BUS AND RAIL FACILITY WILL PROVIDE MORE BENEFITS TO THE
PEOPLE
IN THEIR DAY-TO-DAY LIFE.
SECONDLY
, THERE ARE MORE DISADVANTAGES TO NOT IMPROVING ROADS. MOST TIMES,
PEOPLE
COULDN'T ABLE TO GO TO THEIR OFFICES IN TIME BECAUSE OF THE DAMAGED
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WHICH
TAKE
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MORE TIME TO COVER THE DISTANCE. ANOTHER ONE IS THAT IN RECENT RESEARCH 50% OF
PEOPLE
ARE GETTING ACCIDENTS BECAUSE OF IMPERFECT WAYS .
HENCE
, NEGLECTING THE WHARF
HAVE
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A MORE NEGATIVE IMPACT ON THE COMMUNITY. IN CONCLUSION, PROVIDING FREQUENT BUSE AND RAILWAY FACILITIES ARE NOT BEING HELPFUL TO PUBLIC MORE THAN SAFETY ROADS. SO, FUNDING FOR OPEN TRANSPORT HAS FEWER BENEFITS THAN CONSTRUCTING NEW ROADS.
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