You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them Write at least 150 words.

Dear Camila, I miss you! How have you been? I have not seen you for quite some time. I still remember when you
last
visited. What a fun weekend that was. I'm writing to you to actually inform you that some of your things are still at my place. Remember the blue jacket you wore for the concert? That's still with me. I
also
have your small make-up pouch. I have dry-cleaned your jacket and kept it nicely folded in a cloth bag along with your make-up pouch. I know you have a lot of cosmetics so I'm sure you didn't need any of what you left at my place. Well, I wanted to share with you that I have joined the spinning classes I was talking to you about. It's been two weeks already and they have been great. I enjoy attending them. I am
also
into Netflix off lately. Let me know if you have any suggestions for me.  I apologize for not writing earlier about
this
.
However
, I actually found your belongings only recently while I was cleaning my apartment. Let me know how you want me to return them to you. Perhaps, another fun weekend soon? Looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, ZB
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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