Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the most heated issues about the environment these days
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has to do with human activities. It is obvious that
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plants and
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species
spices
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species
are affected by human behaviour globally, many claims we are so far from changing anything,
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, others maintain that we are still capable to start
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from now on. So I believe that opinion may be true, and ,
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there is time for our environment to cope with
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I elaborate on both views and write my opinion.
Firstly
, If
governments
do not do anything about
this
situation, it may not only contribute to many animal distinctions but
also
many jungles and Greenlands will disappear soon. As a vivid ,example many virgin forests are diminished nowadays to build palm oil farms. to tackle
this
setback many
governments
attempt to legislate
this
problem by giving certificates to experts to prevent any damage to green lands and deforestation. If
this
kind of imposing rule commenced sooner, we have a better globe in
this
era.
Secondly
, another tangible issue has to do with the illegal animal product industry, numerous of
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spicies
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are hunted by poachers for skins, furs, horns, leather and even tooth and
this
could contribute to a distinction of many endangered
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as Rhino, elephants and many others,
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there is a multitude of fashion brands which use natural leather for their product and they even breed innocent creatures for their skin, to cope with
this
issue pupils should get habit informed to not purchase
such
products neither with natural leather nor with any animals organs.
Conversely
, many folks insist that it is too late for any kind of action,
this
toxic and insensible belief could create major problems in near future, as a vivid example they believe there is no chance to revive distinicted
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or plants, and they do not ever care about them since they did not know about consequences of losing these vital creatures and greens, To enlighten them
governments
should create programs for all the societies to ensure that everybody knows the real value of animals and plants. in summary, societies and
governments
should impose rules about
this
situation before it is getting too late for that. by imposing rules and habits forming the people we will get closer to a better world.
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