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Low- price airlines lack most of convenience of normal air plane flights.However, the prices of the tickets are usually lower. Discuss negative and positive aspect of having lower rates of air plane tickets for travelers. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your response.

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It is true that nowadays travelling become cheaper ,especially
air
 travel. Flights ticket prices are getting lower. I think it is a negative development for
people
 as well as the government.
This
 essay intends to describe both views in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand, there are many benefits to cheaper
air
 travel. The
first
 and foremost reason is that
people
 can enjoy varieties of western products due to lower taxes on flights.
For instance
, previously
people
 preferred to wear bata company shoes only.
However
, nowadays many types of international shoe brands are available due to global market trends.
Such
 as Nick, PUMA, New balance, and so on. Another advantage is that it can increase the global economy.
People
 would more travel due affordable rate of travelling facilities.
Consequently
, counties can rise their economical status through their popular places. On the negative side, it can create
air
 pollution in the environment.
Air
 vehicles need more fuel ,especially during landing time , which may produce more toxic gases in the
air
. It is responsible for the detrimental effects on the environment.
Also
, polluted
air
 is harmful to
people
's well-being. It can raise more health problems or diseases like respiratory diseases, cardiovascular disorders, ear crises, and many more. One more demerit is that it may cause noise pollution. Generally, flights create more noise nearby airports .
Hence
, their residential
people
 get disturbed by the loud noise. They can not leave peacefully. To conclude, there are negative as well as
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positive
side
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sides
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 to it.Societies can purchase all international items easily. ,
Also
 it is a great way to increase the economic level.
Nevertheless
, I believe that
their
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there
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 are more drawbacks. It leads to more health hazards by polluted weather. And,
people
 have to compromise with their peace.
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