Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are some debates about focusing on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In ,general I support the idea that people should always imagine and plan their future, especially in countries which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.

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of all, I think human needs a dream and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only lives by today and stops planning about the ultimate, they will lose interest in developing themselves for a better world.

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especially for countries having hope means everything for their survival in

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fast-changing era.

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, by stop thinking about the time ahead will kill human curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and

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creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better life.

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, we always talk about the American dream, where everybody has their ambition and imagination about their eventual which gives motivation to their nation and

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people all over the world.

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, individuals thinking about consequences that might happen in the future

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protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing any crime, they normally think about their ramifications. For ,example there are a lot of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow

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what kind of chaos might create

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, some of us spend too much time planning, yet can not enjoy

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present time fully. To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining my forthcoming life.

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, every nation and country or individual should have a dream to pursue and a future to plan.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Present enjoyment
Future planning
Long-term satisfaction
Short-term gratification
Economic planning
Infrastructure development
Spontaneity
Immediate pleasures
Balanced approach
Mindfulness
Strategic foresight
Anticipation
Well-being
Present-mindedness
Prosperity

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