In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
In the coming years, automatic
vehicles
will be operated technically. Passengers
will be the only people who will be using these cars, buses
and trucks . Unemployment issues which arises
from Change the verb form
arise
this
phenomenon cannot be compared to the improving
in the adequacy of Replace the word
improvement
time
and safety of passengers
. This
is what my essay shall be discussing.
On one hand, development
of unemployment will be rampant. There is a higher percentage of many individuals remaining unemployed in the near future once the existence of advanced automatic Correct article usage
the development
vehicles
comes to stay. Many drivers of cars, buses
and trucks will find Correct pronoun usage
it difficulty
difficulty
to make ends meet with their family since driving Replace the word
difficult
of
these Change preposition
apply
vehicles
are
their only means of income to cater for themselves and support their families. Change the verb form
is
For example
, a survey conducted by the minister for road and transport Honourable Peter Awuku in 2017 on the number of well known
employment Add a hyphen
well-known
opportunity
in Ghana revealed that almost 85percent of the population of Ghana Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
are
involved in driving as a profession as their main Change the verb form
is
jobs
or a Fix the agreement mistake
job
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
job. However
advancement
of automatic Add an article
the advancement
vehicles
will improve upon
the financial Change preposition
apply
standard
of the economy since Replace the word
standing
increase
prices of petrol and other Replace the word
increasing
vehicle related
items will always enrich the economy with more money.
Add a hyphen
vehicle-related
On the other hand
, time
management of people will be improved. When Correct article usage
the time
vehicles
are ad advanced to operate by themselves, it will save passengers
the problems of being delayed to work or their destinations. This
will go a long way to reduse
the issues of traffic jams on roads since Correct your spelling
reduce
vehicles
will be operated Correct your spelling
by
my
a computer and not by man. Correct your spelling
by
For
example
a survey conducted by final year students of engineering in Kwame Nkrumah Add a comma
,example
university
of Science and Technology in Ghana on the use of public Change the capitalization
University
buses
revealed that people are not able to get to their destinations on time
due to the poor work of drivers and their assistants. Moreover
Add a comma
,Moreover
advancement
in Fix the agreement mistake
advancements
vehicles
to operate on their own will promote the safety of passengers
.
To conclude, there will be an advancement in cars, buses
and trucks to operate on their own in future. The sole individuals travelling in these automatic vehicles
will be passengers
, as a
result
problems of unemployment shall never conquer the positivity of Add the comma(s)
,result
time
accuracy and safety of passengers
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite