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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.

#people #animals #zoos
Zoos
 play an important role in the conservation of different species of
animals
 from
extinction
.Two groups of people have different opinions, the
first
 group of people states that
,
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 caging
animals
 in the zoo is
a
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cruelty while
,
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 the other groups of people have
an
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opinion
zoos
 are both entertaining and ecologically important . Both views are discussed
further
 in
this
 essay . Wild
animals
 actually belong to the wild but, due to the
exceessive
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excessive
 hunting of wild
animals
 like rhinosaures
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,
animals
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 they must be conserved in
zoos
. There are a lot of
animals
 that are on the edge of
extinction
 .
Therefore
 , conservation of these
animals
 is required for the balance of
food
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 chain . Government can improve the habitat of these
animals
 in
zoos
 by giving them an artificial habitat .
For instance
 , there is only two female white rhinosoraus left in
this
 world and scientist are finding a way to reproduce them using gene technology .
On the other hand
 ,
zoos
 are family entertainment and are required for preventing
extinction
 . The number of
the
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black markets has increased . In some forests, there is not enough food available for the wild
animals
 so , most
animals
 will die due to starvation . Some
animals
 may get health issues and injuries due to wild animal attacks and other reasons . These
animals
 can be treated well in
zoos
 To conclude , wild
animals
 which are on the edge of
extinction
 have to be protected in
zoos
 and national parks .
Likewise
 ,
zoos
 are major entertainment for families as well as kids and
zoos
 are essential for the treatment of injured
animals
 and
animals
 with diseases .
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