You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Edward, I am writing

this

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letter to invite you to my

house

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party

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and inform you about the loud noise that might disturb you. Moving to a new

house

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is always exciting and should be celebrated.

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, I would like to formally introduce myself to you. My name is Adam

shawn

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and I just moved

in to

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into

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the

house

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to you,

day

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the day

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before yesterday. The

house

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party

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is to get

know

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to know

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the neighbourhood and get along with everyone in the community. There will be no alcohol

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the

party

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as the kids should be able to have fun with no safety issues. All types of food will be ordered, from Asian to Mexican including Pizza. The

party

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speciality is movie screenings. Top Gun and Toy story are some of the movies that will be running in the

house

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, due to the

movies

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there could be loud noises that might disturb you but please forgive me for the trouble. You are invited

for

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the

party

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as we will be living

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to each other, it is very important we mingle and get along with each other. The

party

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is on Friday, 7pm to 10pm to avoid disturbing other people’s sleep. Hoping to meet you soon and your presence will be received with happiness. Sincerely, Adam Shawn

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

218 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
understanding

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Write about the following topic. The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?