Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern scenario,
people
have to pay entrance charges for many public places. Even a number of Use synonyms
museums
are charged, while Use synonyms
rest
are free of charge. It is agreed that Correct article usage
the rest
Correct your spelling
benefits
benifits
surpass the drawbacks of applying tickets for entering Correct your spelling
benefits
to
Change preposition
apply
museums
sinceUse synonyms
,
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apply
conjestion
would Correct your spelling
congestion
be reduces
as well as money could be allocated for renovations.
Change the verb form
be reduced
Firstly
, Linking Words
majority
of the visitors who visit Correct article usage
the majority
to
Remove the preposition
apply
museum
just because they are free. Fix the agreement mistake
museums
As a result
, a number of Linking Words
museums
are Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
overcrowded
over crowded
. If their management Correct your spelling
overcrowded
implement
a charging scheme for Change the verb form
implements
people
, it would be helped to settle Use synonyms
in
some Change preposition
apply
extend
of Replace the word
extent
above
issue. Add an article
the above
For instance
, it is widely used that charging schemes for vehicles if they drive through the busiest road and towns which are highly Linking Words
poplated
and too many traffic Correct your spelling
populated
conjestions
. Correct your spelling
congestions
congestion
Therefore
, Linking Words
people
could enjoy the arts, cravings, history and monuments in Use synonyms
museums
Use synonyms
with
a calm Change preposition
in
Correct your spelling
quiet
quite
environment.
Correct your spelling
quiet
Secondly
, renovations and basic Linking Words
infrastructurs
could be done by using Correct your spelling
infrastructure
infrastructures
these money
. Most of the Change the determiner
this money
museums
do not have proper direction systems, lighting, pathways, security systems, Use synonyms
cafetaria
and Correct your spelling
cafeteria
lavetry
facilities which are essentials for visitors. Correct your spelling
lavatory
slavery
Then
, Linking Words
people
would be happy to pay, if they receive Use synonyms
a
validity for their money. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, Linking Words
although
most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
developed countries Correct article usage
apply
initially
allocate funds to start public places, charging systems have been implemented for their maintenance.
In conclusion, according to a Linking Words
museum
the charging system may vary, while some are Add a comma
,museum
charge
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charged
off
. Replace the word
of
However
, Linking Words
pros
Correct article usage
the pros
of
charging for Change preposition
to
museums
more than cons becauseUse synonyms
,
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apply
people
have Use synonyms
chance
to experience Correct article usage
a chance
a
upgrade and peaceful museum.Change the article
an
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