There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear
Mr.
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Mr
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Smith, My name is Matt and I am currently staying at 23 West Lane, which comes under the west
bus
area. I am writing
this
letter to complain in the strongest terms about the reliability of the
bus
service, especially in the
last
two weeks.
To begin
with, it is a very crucial time for me as my final university exams are going on. Just
last
week, I had my Chemistry exam and was waiting at the
bus
stop for about 15 minutes, which were
then
further
extended. Unfortunately, the
bus
was half hour late, due to which I suffered various difficulties, particularly during exam registration. Apart from that, there have been several other issues where the
bus
was either way too early or simply too late.
Consequently
, I would kindly advise you to look into
this
issue on an immediate basis.
Furthermore
, you may directly get in touch with the
bus
drivers to know the exact root cause of
such
a problem. I hope to get a resolution on
this
matter soon. I look forward to hearing from you on the update. Yours sincerely, Matt
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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