In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

People have different views about whether the expenditure

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public

transport

service

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should contribute to building fast-train

railways

or enhancing city transportation. In my opinion, the

government

should

spends

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money on the new railway constructions, and I will explain the reasons with both views below. On the one hand, new lines of fast trains among cities have

capacity

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to develop the economy.

Firstly

, we all know that the poor efficiency of

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transportation can

seems

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as the biggest challenge for

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companies located in remote places,

such

as

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food factories, which need to send their goods immediately and maintain

the

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freshness.

Therefore

, the development of

fast-train-lines

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will shrink the time on

road

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and lead to

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better efficiency for them.

Secondly

, compare with the existing public

transport

improvement, the

government

should

hires

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more

staffs

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on

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the program of building cross-cities

railways

,

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increasing the employment rate of a city.

Finally

, building the new

railways

construction not only can

benefits

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the local inhabitants, but

also

bring new business opportunities among diverse citizens.

On the other hand

, fixing the existing public

transport

can sometimes be complicated. Since there is

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of historical buildings in the cities, a range of public

transports

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transport

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,

for example

, the subway lines, should be considered carefully to avoid wrecking them.

However

, the

government

will spend less on improving existing public

transport

compare with

spend

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large figures of money on

railway

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the railway

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, which is able to

relief

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the burdens on the

government

's financial situation, yet their work can still be seen by their citizens. In conclusion, even though putting money

on

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existing public

transport

have some good sides,

but

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spending on new

railways

can

seems

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as

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a long-term investment with several advantages.