Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

Nowadays, there are manifold crimes around the world, where
teenagers
are the main victims. Some countries are considering the proposal of imposing a curfew on
teenagers
in which they are not allowed to go outside unless they are accompanied by an adult. I strongly agree with the given statement and In
this
essay, I will discuss some reasons for the given statement and
then
I will give some relevant examples. On the one side,
Teenagers
are the victims and they targeted mostly in recent days. To illustrate, young communities will spend most of their time going to parties, celebrations, etc.
Moreover
, these celebrations are done mostly during the night or evening times. So, there is a high scope of kidnapping during the evening and night mainly among
teenagers
because most young communities are available that and it is easy for kidnapping and robbery.
For instance
, Recently, In Hyderabad, a teenage girl is kidnapped during the nighttime and she was rapped by kidnappers who
then
killed her.
Secondly
, Teenage communities do some funny things but it may lead to dangerous situations because they don't have the maturity to behave well compared to adults.
For instance
,
Teenagers
throw their friends into the swimming pool to do fun with them but it may lead to death if he/she won't know how to swim. Adolescents will get involved in illegal actions like consuming drugs, etc.
Moreover
, they will inform their parents that they are to meet their friends but they will try to do some illegal activities.
For example
, Most
teenagers
go on a Goa trip by informing their family but they consume alcohol and try to take drugs. To sum up, In my view, When
teenagers
are accompanied by adults it gives them protection from dangerous activities.
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