Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The
use
of laptops and smartphones in today's society is increasing so rapidly for purpose of
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each
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other. It is believed that it had
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on
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and writing
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of individuals. I partially support
this
statement.
This
article will discuss both aspects and a reasonable conclusion. To commence with, the merits of these technical devices.
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first
and foremost, these computers and laptops are
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to establish a link with all the people around the world. These things
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major
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role in good connections among several countries
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globe
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.Apart from
this
,mobile phones
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society in case of any big disaster.
For
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when
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state was suffering from
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,the world knows
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problem just because of these telephones.
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,these devices
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an important role in the development of
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. On the flip side,the
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a negative impact on our reading as well as writing skills. The
use
of these devices for more time reduces our thinking power and
also
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of our eyes which creates problems for us while reading.
For instance
, a survey states that 71%
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are suffering from mental illness and 78%
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from eye problems,just because of sitting in front of
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for
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time.
Moreover
, the awareness of
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telecommunications makes people
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as they just type on keyboards rather than
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, which may
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to reduces
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writing power. In conclusion, it is stated that the excessive
use
of these mechanics creates a lot of trouble for mankind but it is true that
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advantages somewhere outweigh these problems
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some extent. So the
use
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should be in
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way
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