Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweight its disadvantages.
In
the
Correct article usage
apply
modern day
society, everyone wants to be healthy to the fullest. Add a hyphen
modern-day
Healthcare
services
should be universal for all human beings. However
, in Add a hyphen
modern-day
modern day
society Add a hyphen
modern-day
healthcare
is seen more as a business a way to make money since everyone want
to be healthy. Change the verb form
wants
This
essay will outline how the advantages outweighs
the disadvantages.
Change the verb form
outweigh
People
are put off from accessing private healthcare
due to its costs. Majority
of Correct article usage
The majority
people
do not have enough money to afford private care
and survive Correct your spelling
daily
daliy
living. In America, Correct your spelling
daily
healthcare
is privatised. Here citizens need insurance to access
health
services
or a good income to afford it. People
living with the
Correct article usage
a
Correct your spelling
minimum
minimun
income can not pay the insurance cost, Correct your spelling
minimum
therefore
, they avoid going to the doctors to seek treatment. Health
is impacted negatively, his
can lead to a negative spiral - they can Correct pronoun usage
which
Replace the word
lose
loose
their job because their Correct your spelling
lose
heath
is deteriorating. Correct your spelling
health
This
can lead to bills not being paid, less
money for living costs, which lead to bankruptcy and being made homeless. For Correct word choice
and less
this
reason, health
costs should be reduced and not increased due to competition.
This
society where everything you need can be Change preposition
In this
purshased
instantly - Correct your spelling
purchased
people
want the same concept in health
services
. Private services
provides
quick, Change the verb form
provide
high quality
Add a hyphen
high-quality
access
to all types of healthcare
without needing a referral from the General Practioner. For instance
, in my life
I had a dermatological problem. I went through the National Add a comma
,life
Health
Services
to my GP, which, took a couple
weeks to see and he did not know what the problem was since he had no Add the preposition
ofcouple
access
to the diagnostic tools. Furthermore
, It took another month for a referral to see a specialist. In
that time my condition got worse before seeing the GP, Change preposition
During
further
resulting in scarrring
, burning and hyperpigmentation before I saw a Dermatologist. Correct your spelling
scarring
Hence
, if private
clinic was available Correct article usage
a private
then
the condition would have not deteriorated and would have been solved instantly. Private healthcare
can provide care
without a waiting list, see all patients with access
to great health
technologies and provide exceedingly well care
to all. As a result
, patients will feel relieved once seen quickly and not stressed, they can continue to carry on with daily activities without being in pain or not waiting in limbo for a diagnosis.
In a nutshell, Health
care
services
should be made available to everyone. The advantages does
outweigh the disadvantages of private Change the verb form
do
health
services
. They provide instant, great quality
Add a hyphen
great-quality
care
, which, destresses the patients.Submitted by debi.12 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...