Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
According to the masses,
Music
brings together people
from different races, cultures and age groups. I strongly agree with this
statement.
I think music
Transcends our cultural heritage. People
from different ethnicities and traditions set their differences aside when it comes to music
. Not only do songs
introduce the history and living style of people
from different areas but, it also
teaches foreign language to their listeners, for
example
I learned a lot of Korean words from listening to different Korean Add a comma
,example
songs
and I also
learned about their living style. It can also
be seen in different festivals and Tablo shows, where people
belonging to different cultures come and perform their different folk songs
and the crowd enjoys it. Especially at wedding receptions
different traditional Add a comma
,receptions
songs
unite the masses.
I also
think that music
is a way of getting to know the older generation. Music
is a universal language and people
, old and young enjoy it alike. In today’s world some studios such
as coke studio, and Nescafe basement, are remaking old songs
. They are giving a twist to old songs
by adding some modern techniques like techno and rap. These types of songs
are becoming really popular in my country. To give an example, I really enjoy listening to remodelled songs
with my grandparents. I think that music
has eliminated the age gap between generations and made it possible to communicate with elders easier.
In conclusion, I would like to say that Music
Unites people
across the globe. Different populations, generations, and races find entertainment through music
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