You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter give the details of the flight explain what the problem with the food was say what the airline should do about it.

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Dear Sir I'm writing to bring to your attention that I'm unhappy about the services provided by your airlines in the recent travel made by me in your airlines.

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, the food service was totally a disaster. Let me explain my situation in detail, I travelled by flight A360 on 26 Sep 2022, from point A to point B and I have opted for vegetarian meals. But during the travel, I was provided with a non-vegetarian meal and when I raised the issue with the flight attendant, they don't seem to care much about it and the meal was only replaced with a soft drink, which doesn't seem appropriate. I would kindly request you to take immediate action and make sure that the passengers are provided with the food they have ordered. Please make sure that these kinds of situations are not repeated in the future, as these will cause a bad reputation for your airlines and will be a hindrance to the growth of your business. Thank you for your consideration yours truly Hari Vignesh

Submitted by t.harivignesh on Thu Sep 15 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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The Closing

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PERSONAL INFORMATION These days more people put their personal information, such as names, addresses and telephone numbers, online for everyday activities such as socialising on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opininon.

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