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You recently did a short cookery course the cookery school has ask for your feedback on this course Write a letter to the course director at cookery school in your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Sahi how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you like the school to offer

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Dear Mr Smith, I am writing
this
 letter in response to your email about the feedback on the Italian cookery classes which I have taken
last
 month.
First
 of all, I want to let you know that I really enjoyed my learning time with Mrs Paulson, who has vast experience in the food industry.
Initially
, I was very uncomfortable in the class, but she made me feel at home and settled me down which boost my morale. Her positive attitude towards teaching has really impressed me a lot. By taking
this
 course, I am pretty much confident in making extremely tasty dishes. Occasionally, I do some experiments by blending different kinds of ingredients with different sauces. One thing that I have noticed is that the school does not offer cookery classes on Indian dishes which I expect they should provide. I can assure you that the Indian community would love to join your school for the class as many students prefer to learn cooking. Your faithfully. Ishant Kesar
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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