You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. There is a problem with the photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot. In your letter •tell him/her about the problem with your photos •say which photo you would like him/her to send you •explain why you need this photo.
Dear Jude,
Thank you for accompanying me to Ladakh. I enjoyed being with you. I am writing regarding one of the photos from the trip that you clicked.
Actually, I did not notice that my camera lens was damaged
as a result
of which all the pictures that I took turned out to be blurred. I tried several tools to improve the quality of the pictures, but unfortunately, I did not succeed. Although
it will be difficult for you to send me all the snaps taken, could you send me the shot taken at Pangong lake
, the one on the rocks?
Do you remember the scene from the movie, 3 Capitalize word
Lake
idiots
, at the Capitalize word
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lake
? We created the exact pose as in the movie and that was my primary motivation for taking Capitalize word
Lake
this
holiday. In addition
to this
, it was the most memorable moment of the trip for me. Could you send this
particular shot to me on my email id
? Thank God, your camera was working fine!
Let’s plan a holiday to Goa in the winter holidays. Talk to you soon.
Yours sincerely,
JaiCorrect your spelling
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task response
Create a more formal opening and provide a more direct statement of the problem with the photos.
coherence and cohesion
Use transitional phrases and cohesive devices to better connect the ideas in the letter.