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There is little difference in the shops now operating in various nations. Some people think this is positive development,while other believe it is negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#difference #shops #nations #people #development
In the modern world, a lot of
shops
is
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 becoming regularized and
try
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 to go out abroad with the same
service
. Some people think
this
 development has
the
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a
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 positive effect on our life and
anothers
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others
are
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disagree with that. I would like to deal with the issue with both views below. From
the
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 positive perspective, we can expect the same
service
 whenever, which is important to trust the quality of products or foods. If a tasty
of
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menu
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 is changed according to who is cooking and where is located, people would be
dissapointed
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disappointed
 because it is hard to believe what the
cheif
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chief
chef
 put in dishes.
Therefore
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shops
give
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advantage
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an advantage
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 to both, owners and customers, and it is easy to apply in other nations. The negative
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view points
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viewpoints
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 are there is no more
creative
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creativity
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 or unique from the
shops
 because the owner of
shops
want
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 to
success
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succeed
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 with the same
service
.
Although
this
 trend makes the owners
to
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get rich, consumers only experience the same things. A lot of shopping
center
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centers
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 include many
shops
 but there
are
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is
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 rarely a small shop which is just started with self-employment. Some
kind
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kinds
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 of
service
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services
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 are
reducing
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 and
this
 trend is not good for all. In conclusion, in a world, we love that we can eat the same food in Mcdonald but if our world only
have
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 a few kinds of restaurants, It will
makes
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our
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us
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 so
boring
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. People must consider the survival of small
shops
 to keep the diversity of our society.
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