You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are having the party • describe your plans for the party • suggest how your friend can travel to the party and where he / she can stay

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Dear Alex, Hope you are doing good! I wanted to formally invite you to a party at my place on 30th September. As you know, I have always dreamed of buying a house.

Last

month, with the god grace I am able to fulfil my long-due dream, it is in New Jersey at the 3rd St. George Road. On that occasion, my wife is organizing

this

party at our new residence. We have prepared everything for the party, starting with an evening snack. Following

this

, we will play some school-time games in the backyard. After that, we have arranged a DJ, who will be there till Midnight and will enjoy as we do.

Finally

, after

this

, we will have our dinner. I know that you are far away from New Jersey, but I have arranged flight tickets for you, and I will share the details of them.

Also

, in our new house, one room is fully unoccupied which you can occupy during your stay. I am excited to see you after so long time and hope you can spare a day for us and be a part of our happiness. You're loving, Shivam

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

193 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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