In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
In
this
technological advancement era, Add an article
the robot
a robot
robot
will soon be Fix the agreement mistake
robots
norm
. Many of the Add an article
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task
which Change to a plural noun
tasks
are
performed by Change the verb form
is
humans
will soon be replaced by machines and robots
. In my opinion
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,opinion
this
change will have more benefits than drawbacks.
Robots
can perform many task
. One of the advantages is it can Change to a plural noun
tasks
work
in dangerous and hazardous environments such
as working with explosives, deadly
chemicals or in Correct word choice
and deadly
the
production areas or where high temperatures thing needs to be handled. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
they Add a comma
,Moreover
work
faster and does
not need sick leaves or holidays, whereas Correct subject-verb agreement
do
humans
require breaks during the day to maintain focus and productivity. This
will lead to higher productivity and consistency. Most of
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apply
the
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apply
people
hate their jobs
and instead
they can do more interesting work
. Jobs
which are labor
intensive and repetitive will be replaced by Change the spelling
labour
robots
. To maintain the quality of task
, it can be supervised by Add an article
the task
humans
.
Despite of
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apply
this
advantages, Correct determiner usage
these
this
transformation will be far from painless. Many people
will lose their job in Add an article
a relative
relative
short period of time. They will have to relocate and find similar or better Change the adjective
relatively
jobs
in order to feed their families and paying
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Jobs
where human
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humans
interact
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interactions
such
as salespeople and waiters will be replaced and due to that less
human interactions will occur which will lead to Correct quantifier usage
fewer
people
getting more
lonelier than ever. Change the word
apply
Robot
are only Fix the agreement mistake
Robots
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programmed
programed
to do Correct your spelling
programmed
certain
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a certain
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
operation
and Fix the agreement mistake
operations
people
will have to learn to deal with them and find the work
around this
development.
To conclude, I still believe that robots
will have more
positive impact Add an article
a more
in
the world. The benefits that Change preposition
on
robots
bring are better for humans
even if it doesn't look that way in
the transition period. Change preposition
during
This
change will not be easy for people
but its
better Replace the word
it's
it is
in
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from
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the long
long term
perspective.Add a hyphen
long-term
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