Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position

The majority of people believe that

globalization

and the increasing of multinational companies produce harm to the environment. In my perspective, I strongly agree with

this

statement because there are a lot of disadvantages

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the advantages when a new company comes into a developing

country

. In

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essay, I will explain what are the negative

development

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developments

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with some relevant examples.

Firstly

, there are major threats to the farming lands, when multinational companies target the countries with low laws for land preservation. Obviously, if they approach the government

then

they would go for business with them to grow the

country

economically. But

this

will impact the agricultural lands.

For instance

, industries are mostly built in rural parts of the

country

because land rates are low

as well

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normal people generally

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afraid of the government.

Furthermore

,It could pose a threat to small and local businesses.

Secondly

,

wastage

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waste

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from the industries

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disposed of into the river, which causes water pollution and spoils the aquatic ecosystem.

Similarly

,

Globalization

can increase the unemployment rate since it demands higher-skilled work at a lower price. In countries where Companies are relatively incapable of producing highly skilled workers, the unemployment rate can increase in those countries.

Moreover

,

Globalization

can raise the problem of inequality everywhere in the world by increasing specialization and trade. By trade boost of the per-capita income, it

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cause

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relative poverty, worldwide.

To conclude

this

topic, In my opinion,

globalization

and the development of foreign industrialization are good for a

country

's economy but they should be limited and the government should sanction many

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laws

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regulations

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and regulations

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for land preservation