Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As for me, I think environmental problems occur because of the extinction of some particular species of plants and animals. Because I do believe that the existence of various animals and plants on our
Earth
are having a special role in order to keep our Earth
alive and in balance. As we know from history, living creatures such
as animals and plants in any era played an important part in Earth
's growth. Imagine the fish in the ocean extinct because too many fish are taken out from the ocean. It will possibly create an imbalance that can affect the food web and lead to a loss of other important marine life. Or imagining the increase of the sea level because we, human, are not mindful of using our resources which comes from the Earth
. Other issues that I think also
caused a serious environmental problem is our behaviour and habit towards living on this
Earth
. In this
era, we are trained to act fast, think fast, and do multiple tasks at one time. We forget that we have the right and time to think, to contemplate the best response that we have to take. In order to keep the balance in life, in our environment. In short, we as a human who has the sense to think, act, and express different from other creatures, actually have to act mindful in every action
we took. Especially when it comes to our environment. Life goes by and the environmental problem is still here and might become worst. So, as the Earthling, we have to take serious action
on this
issue. Started from now and starting from ourselves. Remember that we all can take action
to make our Earth
a better place for our
future generations. The Correct pronoun usage
apply
action
we can partake actually pretty simple. Such
as always bringing our water bottle anytime we go out,
so that we don't buy Remove the comma
apply
mineral
water Add an article
a mineral
bottle
. Use public transportation as often as possible, so that the consumption of gas and pollution will reduce. Bring out a tote bag or shopping bag anywhere we go out, so we don't need to use single-use plastic. And we Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
also
can recycle our clothes, so that we don't have to buy a
new cloth. Nowadays the increase in cloth waste Correct article usage
apply
become
a serious issue. I believe, the small Change the verb form
becomes
action
that we take, will have some impact on our Earth
. I hope we all can be mindful human beings so that the Earth
can live longer.Submitted by IELTS_8 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite