Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

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Dear Mr Wong, I am writing

this

letter in regard to the

last

dishwasher pipe repair, where the plumber changed the water pipeline. But ,

still

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,still

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there is some issue with the pipe connection. Now the dishwasher is taking so much time to clean the utensils , It is taking more than the regular time like 3-4 hours . which will lead to high hydro bills and water wastage itself . I am not sure about the exact issue but probably pipeline connections are not proper which is why during the rinse time it is not getting proper water supply.

Moreover

,due to pressure sometimes the system causes emergency shutdowns. I would kindly request , to send a plumber again so that he can do the repair work properly , Possibly on weekend , so that I can supervise him directly and check if it is working properly or not. I hope you will address

this

concern as soon as possible . Yours faithfully, Pooja

Submitted by pooja.raikwar27 on Sat Sep 17 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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163 words

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