Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports. What are the reasons for this, and is it a positive or negative development?

In

this

present world,

children

have many activities to do in their daily lives.

However

, many

children

are so immersed in

computer

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game

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games

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that

do

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not want to go outside in order to do physical activities. It

become

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an emergency condition

to

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children

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children's

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development. Analysing the

the

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temptation of computer

games

to

children

, as well as the lack of

sports

for

children

will clarify these matters.

Firstly

, computer game

contents

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are developed to

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attract

extract

actract

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attract

children

’s attention.

For instance

, it is could be made based on a fairytale story with many

heros

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heroes

in the

games

that

children

could play as these models to get the victory. So, these

games

are successful

to

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awake

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children

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desire to

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achieve

achive

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achieve

their dreams,

lead

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to they cannot

log

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out of these programmes.

Thus

,

this

is the reason why

children

feel difficult to stand up when they begin to play a game.

Secondly

,

nowaday

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, the lack of physical activities for

children

in their daily life could be a

sadness

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situation.

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,

children

are kept

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indoors

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indoor

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for a long time

instead

of being outside to play

sports

cause

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their parents do not give time for them. The parents often concentrate on work to afford for

family’s

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the family’s

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daily

cost

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, so they could not spend time

to take

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the

children

to the nature area frequently to

to

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do

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sports

.

Therefore

, it becomes

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apparent

apperant

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apparent

that

children

have little chance to go outside for

sports

. In conclusion, I believe that the

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situation

situtation

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situation

that

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children

do

commputer

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computer

games

a lot

instead

of playing

sports

is

negative

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a negative

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development for

children

. I suggest that parents should take care

about

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their

children

so that they could be grown up well in both mental and physical health.