Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports. What are the reasons for this, and is it a positive or negative development?
In
this
present world, Linking Words
children
have many activities to do in their daily lives. Use synonyms
However
, many Linking Words
children
are so immersed in Use synonyms
computer
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a computer
game
that Fix the agreement mistake
games
do
not want to go outside in order to do physical activities. It Change the verb form
does
become
an emergency condition Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
to
Change preposition
for
Use synonyms
children
development. Analysing the Change noun form
children's
the
temptation of computer Remove the redundancy
apply
games
to Use synonyms
children
, as well as the lack of Use synonyms
sports
for Use synonyms
children
will clarify these matters.
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Firstly
, computer game Linking Words
contents
are developed to Fix the agreement mistake
content
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attract
extract
actract
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attract
children
’s attention. Use synonyms
For instance
, it is could be made based on a fairytale story with many Linking Words
heros
in the Correct your spelling
heroes
games
that Use synonyms
children
could play as these models to get the victory. So, these Use synonyms
games
are successful Use synonyms
to
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in
awake
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awakening
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children
desire to Change noun form
children's
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achieve
achive
their dreams, Correct your spelling
achieve
lead
to they cannot Wrong verb form
leading
log
out of these programmes. Wrong verb form
logging
Thus
, Linking Words
this
is the reason why Linking Words
children
feel difficult to stand up when they begin to play a game.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
nowaday
, the lack of physical activities for Correct your spelling
nowadays
children
in their daily life could be a Use synonyms
sadness
situation. Replace the word
sad
For example
, Linking Words
children
are kept Use synonyms
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indoors
indoor
for a long time Correct your spelling
indoors
instead
of being outside to play Linking Words
sports
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cause
their parents do not give time for them. The parents often concentrate on work to afford for Correct word choice
because
family’s
daily Correct article usage
the family’s
cost
, so they could not spend time Fix the agreement mistake
costs
to take
the Change the verb form
taking
children
to the nature area frequently to Use synonyms
to
Correct your spelling
do
sports
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it becomes Linking Words
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apparent
apperant
that Correct your spelling
apparent
children
have little chance to go outside for Use synonyms
sports
.
In conclusion, I believe that the Use synonyms
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situation
situtation
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situation
that
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in that
children
do Use synonyms
commputer
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computer
games
a lot Use synonyms
instead
of playing Linking Words
sports
is Use synonyms
negative
development for Add an article
a negative
children
. I suggest that parents should take care Use synonyms
about
their Change preposition
of
children
so that they could be grown up well in both mental and physical health.Use synonyms
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