Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports. What are the reasons for this, and is it a positive or negative development?

In

this

present world,

children

have many activities to do in their daily lives.

However

, many

children

are so immersed in

a

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computer

games

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that

does

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not want to go outside in order to do physical activities. It becomes an emergency condition for

children

's development. Analysing the temptation of

computer

games

to offspring, as well as the lack of sport for

children

will clarify these matters.

Firstly

,

computer

game content

are

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developed to attract

youngster’s

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attention.

For instance

, it is could be made based on a fairytale story with many heroes in the

games

that

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could play as these models to get the victory. So, these

games

are successful in awakening

children

's desire to achieve their dreams, leading to they cannot logging out of these programmes.

Thus

,

this

is the reason why

children

feel difficult to stand up when they begin to play a game.

Secondly

, nowadays, the lack of physical activities for

children

in their daily life could be a sad situation.

For example

,

children

are kept indoors for a long time

instead

of being outside to play

sport

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because their parents do not give time for them. The parents often concentrate on work to afford

for

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the family’s daily costs, so they could not spend time taking the

children

to the nature area frequently to do sports.

Therefore

, it becomes apparent that

children

have little chance to go outside for sports. In conclusion, I believe that the situation in that

children

do

computer

games

a lot

instead

of playing sports is a negative development for

children

. I suggest that parents should take care of their

children

so that they could be grown up well in both mental and physical health.