Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others believe that scientists are more influential. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that

politicians

have the greatest effect on the

world

while others believe that

scientists

are more effective.

This

essay will discuss both sides of view and give a result.

Firstly

,

politicians

are great leaders. Their authority is limitless

therefore

they are more influential than

scientists

. Research conducted by CNN revealed that 90% of

decision

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made

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are maden

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maden

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made

by

politicians

. They shape

future

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the future

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with their decisions. All of the president

politicians

but not all

of

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scientists

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the scientists

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. They manage

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the country

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country

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country's

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economy,

therefore

,

politicians

are take

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more responsible than

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a scientist

the scientist

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scientist

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scientists

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. As for

me

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politicians

are more effective than

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a scientist

the scientist

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scientist

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scientists

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. I have got 2 reasons.The

first

reason is

Politicians

are manage

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whole

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the whole

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country and

world

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the world

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But

scientists

are just responsible for

lab

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the lab

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.

Such

as Donald Trump manages

country's

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the country's

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relationships but Aziz Sancar just deals with lab and some type of topic.

Secondly

,

scientists

invent or discover so many things in the lab.

Scientists

are very smart people compared to

politicians

. An extensive survey conducted by CNBC revealed that 80% of improvements made by

scientists

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, therefore,

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therefore

are more crucial than

politicians

.

Such

as Jordan

greynord

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greyboard

found a vaccine in 1867.

Afterwards

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he improved vaccines and untangled so many illnesses.

This

improvement very positively affected the

world

. The

second

reason is

technology

.

Technology

is the one of most influential

thing

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things

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to do

world

. Research conducted recently indicated that Scientist

contribute

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to

development

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the development

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of

technology

However

,

politicians

does

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do

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not much affect

technology

To conclude, Both of them change the

world

but

Politicians

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decisions and authority

more

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are more

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influential than

scientists

. Professor suggested that

Politicians

are the most effective people in the

world

.