Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the present situation,

air

pollution

has become a common concern all over the globe which has to

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. Some people insist that

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using private

cars

for a day can bring about

huge

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amount of merits

on

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dwindling the

air

pollution

, while others maintain that there

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more

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effective

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affective

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methods to deal with

this

problem. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the former argument.

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the outset, it is undeniable that not only

using

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private vehicles exacerbate the

air

quality but the industry fields

also

take a huge responsibility. To be specific, offering higher taxes to the industries may

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exert

excert

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exert

a positive impact on alleviating

the

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air

pollution

. Another measure worth mentioning is that encouraging individuals to take transportations in their daily lives,

thus

this

will eventually lead the number of

vehicals

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vehicles

in the road that emit fumes.

Nevertheless

, I am strongly

convienced

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convinced

that preventing the use of

cars

can be the most influential way on solving

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air

pollution

. There is no doubt that it is the fumes from the vehicles

that

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the staple culprit of deteriorating the standard of

air

quality. According to

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research

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conducted by the U.S government, the use of private

cars

comprised

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68% ,which increases

the

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carbon and

sulpher

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sulphur

dioxide.

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, the term '

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major fact that allows problems to be solved or at least reduced. What I mean is that compared with increasing the taxes which seems to be temporary, making a specific day with no

cars

as a policy will constantly lower the

carborn

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carbon

footprint and

as a result

,

this

policy may bring about

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impact on

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society in the long term. In conclusion,

although

there are several methods that can aid in mitigating

the

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air

pollution

, I am

firmly

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of my opinion that avoiding the use of

cars

are

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the most crucial part to deal with the never unsurmountable problem if the government take an action there and

then

.