The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
The layouts display the industrial
area
of Norbiton, how it looks at present
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the present
the
its planned future development.
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Overall
, it is apparent that the industrial area
will be transformed to
a residential Change preposition
into
area
with addition
of a variety of structures including housing, shops, Add an article
the addition
medical
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a medical
centre
& school.
First and foremost, the centre
of the area
will have four connecting roads which are currently just two. Surrounding the centre
from the west side are three factories in the present time which will be replaced by three houses to the northwest, shops at southwest
and a medical Add an article
the southwest
centre
at
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in
southeast
. Moving to the east side from Add an article
the southeast
central
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the central
junction
, we have five factories currently which will be demolished to construct houses and playground
on the sides on the sides of the road and Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
school
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a school
at the end
.
New
road will be constructed from Add an article
The new
A new
central
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the central
junction
to the farmland in northern
direction with Correct article usage
the northern
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the inlcusion
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of new settlements. Correct your spelling
inclusion
On the other hand
, the road to the south from central
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the central
junction
will observe a circular junction
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