When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

As a world belongs to the 21st century new trends in

technology

grows rapidly. Some people say due to

this

improvement

of

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technology

the old things and

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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will change

unbuildably

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unbuildable

. In my

opinion

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I will agree with

this

statement. Nowadays, using

technology

significantly increases all over the world. For

an

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example

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most of the community uses online banking

instead

of visiting the bank. Online marketing, online bookings e-learning,

that is

online education

are

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the most popular trends. Communication

is

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also becomes

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also

become very convenient

among

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the community. Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram and

emailsmail

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emails mail

emails email

brought the world smaller and easier to communicate. Vehicles can move without a driver and banks and offices can function without

manpower

.

However

, these things take people apart from each other and their old traditions are washed away. Most of the old skills are based on

manpower

. Because of

this

technology

manpower

was replaced by machines. For

an

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example, handlooms were

a

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traditional

skills

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skill

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in Sri Lanka and India. Making handlooms are a process which takes too much time and hard work and the final product is tremendous.

Moreover

, nowadays these looms can be made by using machines. These power looms are high in quality and it is very efficient as

it

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do not take

such

a lot of time. It is cheaper than handlooms as the low requirement of

manpower

.

Therefore

the

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technology

is economical for a country. In conclusion, the development of

technology

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a country will affect the die out of traditional skills. I will argue that trying to keep them alive is

also

pointless because it may cause badly to the economy of the country.