In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
In
this
technological advancement era, robots
will soon be the norm. Many of the tasks which is
performed by Change the verb form
are
humans
will soon be replaced by machines and robots
. In my ,opinion this
change will have more benefits than drawbacks.
Robots
can perform many tasks. One of the advantages is it can work
in dangerous and hazardous environments such
as working with explosives, and deadly chemicals or in production areas or where high temperatures thing needs to be handled, Moreover
they work
faster and do not need sick leaves or holidays, whereas humans
require breaks during the day to maintain focus and productivity. This
will lead to higher productivity and consistency. Most people
hate their jobs
and instead
they can do more interesting work
. Jobs
which are labour intensive and repetitive will be replaced by robots
. To maintain the quality of the task, it can be supervised by humans
.
Despite these advantages, this
transformation will be far from painless. Many people
will lose their job in relatively short periods of time. They will have to relocate and find similar or better jobs
in order to feed their families and pay the bills. Jobs
where human interactions such
as salespeople and waiters will be replaced and due to that fewer human interactions will occur which will lead to people
getting lonelier than ever. Robots
are only programmed to do certain types of operations and people
will have to learn to deal with them and find the work
around this
development.
To conclude, I still believe that robots
will have a more positive impact on the world. The benefits that robots
bring are better for humans
even if it doesn't look that way during the transition period. This
change will not be easy for people
but it's better from a long-term perspective.Submitted by pabhi163 on
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