You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you've done since the course • suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my happiness after watching your live cookery show on channel 9
last
Saturday. I am a beginner in cooking and would like to become a chef in a 5-star hotel. I am still learning different cuisines through your channel. I am watching your sessions since the
first
episode, and most of the menu items provided by you are really great. The most important thing about your course is the way of presenting every dish which I really like the most.
Although
I have gone through your many courses from day one, I started preparing different dishes
last
week and almost prepared 10 different varieties of foods. Especially, I prepared English breakfast most of the time for my family. I wish you can add Indian food menus in your
next
episode as I am originally from India and would like to try for one of my close friends who is having his 18th birthday coming month. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Amit
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