Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. it would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports. d you agree or disagree

Nowadays,

children

are addicted to electronic devices

such

as

computer

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and mobile

phone

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exteremly

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extremely

. It is dangerous for their development process.According to me,

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children

childeren

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children

is supposed to focus on outside

activities

like playing

sports

.Two essential

factor

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push me to think like these.One of them is that

children

those making sport have

sucsesful

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successful

acedemic

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academic

life

.

Secondly

, making sport improve

children

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self-esteem directly in their daily

life

. There are different

type

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of

metod

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method

theachers

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teachers

apply to raise their

students

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sucsess

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success

such

as making

litlle

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little

quiz

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regularly or

encouaging

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encouraging

their

students

to reading

a books

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... Of

course

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those

activities

are

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necessary

neccesary

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necessary

for

students

acedemic

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academic

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life

lives

lifes

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. But there are not enough for

sucsess

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success

. Surveys done show us,

sports

activities

have powerful and

unbeliaveble

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unbelievable

impact over

students

school

sucsess

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success

.

Instead

of spending their free time

by

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playing computer games,

students

should be directed outside

sports

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activities

activites

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activities

. During to course of my

sister

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childhood

chilhood

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childhood

, I push her to

playing

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play

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volleyball

voleyball

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volleyball

.

As

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the

times

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time

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, she adapts herself to playing

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volleyball

voleyball

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volleyball

. One

years

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later, we used to get positive feedback from her

theachers

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teachers

.

Curiosly

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Curiously

enough, sport makes

amazing

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difference

over

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my

sister

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academic

acedemic

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academic

life

. With the commence of

thecnology

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technology

age, most

of

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the teenager

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teenager

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teenagers

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lost their

times

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time

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in front of the computer or phone. It causes limited social connection and friendship

life

. When they go to

social

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area

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, they do not know how they

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should

shoul

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should

behave.It drops out their

self esteem

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self-esteem

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.

Absence

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of social bound

,

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may lead them

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depression

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depresssion

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depression

. To prevent those

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scenarios

senior

senarios

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scenarios

parents should take

responsibilities

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and direct their

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children's

children

childrens

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children

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outside sportive

activities

. Especially, generation X

spend

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most of their

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childhood

chilhood

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childhood

times

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time

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at outside

sports

.It is clear that these opportunities play

important

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an important

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role

over

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in

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their

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development of self-confidence process.

That is

the reason why they called

key

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the key

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locked

child

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children

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. Generation x

keep

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home's

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keys on their packets.After

turn

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back

home

from outside

activities

they used to get

home

on their own even

their

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though their

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parents do not stay

home

.Even they manage domestic

works

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after outside sportive

activities

:)

As a result

, without any doubt,

children

have

to

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support for sportive

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activities

activies

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activities

.It helps them to increase their academic

sucsess

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success

and self-confidence.