2.Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
At present age, the multiplication
life
in big cities
is reducing than
the previous cause of increased living costs, air Change preposition
apply
pollution
and other social disadvantages. Furthermore
, day
by day
various problem is arising at an alarming rate and the topic says
about decreasing virtue of large Verb problem
is
city
life
. I will discuss both causes and solutions to this
trend in detail.
First of all, living
cost in Correct article usage
the living
large
Correct article usage
a large
city
life
is more expensive than in smaller
Correct article usage
a smaller
city
life
or village. A large number of big industry has been built in the big cities
and offers a lot of working opportunities that’s why the population is increasing rapidly. As a result
, air pollution
is growing dramatically cause
of more people living in large Correct your spelling
because
cities
. Additionally
, making environmental effects of the tremendous use of chemicals in industries to produce various goods. Additionally
, the price of daily needs grocery items has increased day
by day
but their salary is not growing as the ratio of value increasing
. People who live in large Wrong verb form
increases
cities
are
very tough to lead their Verb problem
find it
life
with the salary are getting from working Fix the agreement mistake
lives
place
. Correct your spelling
workplace
Although
a lot of facilities have
in big Verb problem
are
cities
, employees are thinking to switch
smaller Verb problem
apply
cities
from
Change preposition
in
there
case Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
not mitigate their expenses.
Correct pronoun usage
they of
However
, this
problem can be resolved with government and individual cooperation. Housing expenses, transport expenses, air pollution
and environmental pollution
can be removed if the government, industry owner
and people take steps together. A large number of employees live with family in a rented house and they spend most part of their salary only to afford Fix the agreement mistake
owners
this
. So it can be resolved if housing facilities has
given to all employees by the company and government.
In conclusion, I think that every cause have a solution and it can be resolved by taking step Verb problem
are
otherwise
the quality of big city
life
will be decreased dramatically for
not affording their daily needs.Change preposition
because of
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