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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problerms are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive ora negative development?

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Today,a lot of people who have a disease are trying to
use
 medicine and they want fewer go to the usual doctors , I think that had a negative change. People who are feeling ill should not
use
 medicines and treatment without visiting a
doctor
.
firstly
 , if they are using incorrect medicines and that caused other problems,
instead
 , they may think that they have a cold and
use
 cold-stop but that wasn’t it and they are eating the wrong tablet.
Secondly
, maybe their
health
 problems are serious and should be controlled by doctors before it's too late.
Finally
 , using drugs without a
doctor
's prescription has risks for ourselves and they would bring a bad effect on our
health
. On another hand, when our
health
 is not completely good it is better that we are visiting a perfect
doctor
 and see our
problem
,
firstly
 , the
doctor
 examines the conditions of our
health
 ,for
instead
 , a blood test would require finding an exact
problem
.
Secondly
, our illness maybe is a serious
problem
 and do not need any drugs.
Finally
 ,we have a comfortable mentality that we do rational and correct work. In conclusion, when people are feeling have a
health
problem
 ,they do not
use
 self-treatment and eat drugs that they think are useful for their illness,
instead
 , they should visit a good
doctor
 and say their
problem
 to him.
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