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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#process #species #e #g #dinosaur #dodo… #reason #people
Some people believe that there
are
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 no reason for people
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tp
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to
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 protect animal
species
 from extinction as it is the result of evolution
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an
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 it even happens in the
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absence
abbsence
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absence
 of human intervention. In my opinion, I disagree with
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 view
the
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 selfish human
activities
such
 as hunting, industrialization and pollution are responsible for
this
 happening.
Firstly
,
the
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environmental factors
plays
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 an important role in natural habitats for animal
species
 and many rare animals were extinct by climate
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such
shuch
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such
 as
dinasours
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dinosaurs
, dodos.
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, according to the US
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, the number of trees, being the
accomodation
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accommodation
accumulation
 of them are cut down in order to clear the area for vast industries. It can be seen that endangered
species
 are
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 out from nature as the industrial
activities
 of humans
thesedays
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these days
 that lead to
disturb
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 the habitats of wild animals.
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, not only the wild animals
are
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affected by
those
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human
activities
 but the sea creatures were exploited because of the expanding seafood market which is
the
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 major disruption of fish in the seabed.
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, the researcher announced that
it
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we are still killing them as present gear. It will attribute to the collapse of the sea environment. It can be seen that
with
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the uncontrol
of
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human
activities
 will lead to the permanent disappearance of some sea
creature
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. In conclusion, it is undeniable that
human
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 are the major contributor to animal extinction and I think that people should preserve those
species
 in order to
kepp
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keep
 the
bio diversity
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biodiversity
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 existence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extinction
  • evolution
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat destruction
  • climate change
  • conservation
  • irreversible
  • ecological balance
  • species preservation
  • environmental ethics
  • sustainability
  • endangered species
  • natural selection
  • ecosystem services
  • wildlife protection
  • moral obligation
  • human intervention
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