You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jazzy and I am going to join a project management training programme in the United Kingdom. I noticed from a follow-up email that you are looking for volunteers for a social event and I offer myself for the role. In my office, I am often responsible to plan important events, coordinating with the event management team, facilitating the guest lecturers and ensure conducting successful meetings. I enjoy playing

such

roles and I am quite confident I would be the right person for your social event as well. I would,

therefore

, request you to send me more details regarding the training session and your plan for it so that I can start contributing right away. My employee ID is 456789 and you can check my profile before selecting me as an organiser. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Pooja

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

146 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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