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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jazzy and I am going to join a project management training programme in the United Kingdom. I noticed from a follow-up email that you are looking for volunteers for a social event and I offer myself for the role. In my office, I am often responsible to plan important events, coordinating with the event management team, facilitating the guest lecturers and ensure conducting successful meetings. I enjoy playing
such
 roles and I am quite confident I would be the right person for your social event as well. I would,
therefore
, request you to send me more details regarding the training session and your plan for it so that I can start contributing right away. My employee ID is 456789 and you can check my profile before selecting me as an organiser. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Pooja
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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