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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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There is a discussion held in society regarding the most appropriate way to benefit public
health
, which concerns the issue of the necessity of contribution
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 the number of sports
facilities
.
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, a lot of people dispute whether
such
increase
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affect
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 public
health
 and whether we should consider other instruments. In the following
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 I will examine the arguments in order to prove that the idea mentioned would be nothing except beneficial. On the one hand, the population of the Earth is considered to be growing.
Thus
, the possibility to use
sport
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 equipment is becoming more and more exclusive and somewhat luxurious because of the lack of balance in
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demand
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 a healthy lifestyle and an actual chance to improve it. The majority of humanity simply is not provided with an accessible way to do sports.
Therefore
, giving the chance to enhance
heath
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 by installing
sport
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facilities
 will increase
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 accessibility of it which means a surge in physical activity of regular citizens.
On the other hand
, the decrease in the quality of public
health
 is the product of many reasons which is in demand
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a complex approach.
Besides
, the installation of
sport
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 equipment alone could not contribute as much as
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society hopes it to due to the lack of
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awareness of
such
 activities.
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, within the program of raising the number of
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facilities
 the
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 company has to be
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. Henceforth, people who weren't aware of the initiative will have the vital information provided. Time and again people are discussing the merits and demerits of the concept
that is
 supposed to benefit public
health
such
 as
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 of
sport
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facilities
.
This
 idea is providing
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 accessible way to increase the quality of physical
health
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soar in
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public awareness and should be included in nowadays agenda.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • sports facilities
  • physical activity
  • exercise
  • chronic diseases
  • heart disease
  • obesity
  • inclusivity
  • participation
  • safe environment
  • social interaction
  • community engagement
  • comprehensive approach
  • health education programs
  • environmental factors
  • healthcare infrastructure
  • quality healthcare services
  • public health initiatives
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