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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is widely believed that there are no ambitions other than visiting or doing a job in an exotic nation by studying another
language
, while others argued that there are many reasons for
this
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essay I will discuss both sides and give my reasons why I agree with the latter part of the view. On the one hand,
people
 tend to believe that the only factor for doing a foreign linguistic course is to migrate or find foreign work.
This
 is because
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 they have to show their
language
 ability when they are applying for a foreign profession or visa.
For instance
, most health workers
such
 as doctors, nurses and dentists have to pass IELTS or OET exam to get their registrants in relevant bodies in the countries, where they wish to move.
Further
, some countries
such
 as France, Sweden and the Middle East seek
language
 skills for their visa application before taking their final decision.
As a result
, it is fair to think by the public that it is the only object for following another
language
.
On the contrary
, others think apart from the aforesaid purpose, individuals can do
this
 as a hobby or improve their knowledge. Currently, there are many bilingual
people
 all over the world but they do it as fun. In fact, the
people
 in England follow many Spanish and French linguistic courses,
although
 they do not need to show their
language
 skills for visa and job applications.
Furthermore
, there are many valuable books were written in foreign languages.
Therefore
, many
people
 try to learn these languages which are the same as books. So, travelling and working purposes are not the only reason for learning the
language
. In conclusion,
although
 the main target is globetrotting and working and working in a foreign country,
people
 can enjoy and improve their knowledge by doing
language
 learning courses.
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  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
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