Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Certain races are under the impression that support services should be a compulsion for teenagers. I largely agree with
this
opinion, as Linking Words
such
deeds would mould the young generation with qualities of empathy, social education and being civilized Linking Words
as well as
productive to help the needy.
To commence with, indulging in social work since childhood would shape the juniors with the feeling of sympathy. Activities Linking Words
such
as visiting old-age homes, orphanages and blind schools will spread awareness among students of their agony. Linking Words
Additionally
, juveniles would reach out to them and inculcate essential life lessons. Linking Words
Also
, they would learn to respect the facilities provided to them. Linking Words
For example
, the significance of parents and family would be realized by teenage kids Linking Words
while
exploring orphanages. Linking Words
Hence
, shifting children towards community actions would be a positive influence on them.
Another point to be considered is, that Linking Words
this
generation is highly logical. Millennials perform any task only if they find it Linking Words
worthy
Replace the word
worth
to do
. Looking at problems faced by socially weaker sections would encourage them to take measures in their favour. Change the verb form
doing
For instance
, teaching poor kids or illiterate masses during their free time. Linking Words
Thus
, to generate a productive and fertile environment in the near future, youth should be enlightened.
To summarize, unpaid social deeds as a compulsory part of high school would be fruitful as it would motivate the upcoming generation to be valuable, worthy and beneficial to needy people. Linking Words
Moreover
, it would teach them to act consciously Linking Words
as well as
cultivate good manners in them.Linking Words
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