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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, a lot of companies invest a lot of money to produce
advertisements
.
Although
 some
people
 believe that, their effect on our perches is less than past, others think that
advertisements
 have an irrefutable role in our buying. I agree with the latter group, and
this
 essay mentioned some reasons for both views. Types of
advertisements
 have changed, and experts of that use different methods for impressing
people
.
In other words
, they are different and helpful ways to persuade
people
 to buy their products.
For example
,
last
 year I decided to go to travel, and I need to reserve a house in nature.
Thus
 I surfed the internet to find a home. During my search, I saw a link that connected me to a website that has a variety of videos about different houses. It was so interesting and shows the comment of previse guests. Actually, it convinced me to rent a house from their company for two nights. It was an amazing and comfortable house.
As a result
, I think a good advertisement which uses some innovative methods could persuade individuals.
On the other hand
, some of the
advertisements
 use old methods.
That is
 the most significant thing that makes
people
 ignore them.
For instance
, most food companies produce
advertisements
 which do not have any changes rather than past.
Therefore
,
this
 could bother
people
 to watch or read these types of
advertisements
.
As a result
, similar or regular
advertisements
 do not have any attraction for
people
, so individuals do not pay attention to them. In conclusion, I think
advertisements
 significantly impact our choices, and with a good and attractive advertisement, we probably tend to buy a thing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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