You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Dear Tyson, I hope you are recovering well. I am so excited to tell you about the level of excitement that we had in today's match. We really missed you in the playing squad. With so much pride, I am very happy to let you know that we have knocked out the other team and secured

first

place in the game. When we started we had a very low score due to climatic conditions as the wind was worse,

However

, we had a rainfall due to which we had to take a break and

thus

resulted in favouring us in the

second

half but still the play was competitive the opponent team was not ready to give up at the end we had a nail-biting finish. I am pretty happy with how the event was led by our squad everyone in the squad had a role to play and each one in the team contributed 100 per cent. It was tough for the sports management to pick the player of the match overall it was so energetic. See you soon. Best regards, Vivek V

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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