Write about the following topic: Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, in
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modern era education Play important role in human life.
History
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subject
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show
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the details of
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freedom fighter and
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history
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it
important
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is important
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children
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should learn it. While, some
people
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believe that it is
waste
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a waste
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of
the
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time
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they can learn another
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like
,
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science and computer that
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will discuss
the
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both views in
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paragraphs. On the one hand, India is a very large country there are many different kinds of
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people
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live
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in
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the nation
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. There are belong to insignificant region and caste they can follow only
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region and caste activity
history
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subject
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also
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show the reality of
region
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the region
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.
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,
Indian
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had been a slave
in
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200 years under the British government and there
are
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a
lot
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freedom fighter Play role in
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the freedom
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for
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of
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country
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the country
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,
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, Mohan Das
karam
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Karam
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chand
gandhi
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and Shid bhagat
singh
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history
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also
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belong to these
people
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should follow their way.
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, some
individual
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individuals
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think that
history
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is a waste of the
time
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because in
modern
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a modern
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generation there are many kinds of
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subject
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subjects
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.
School
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Schools
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and
university
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universities
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should teach only science and computer
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subject
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subjects
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because these are important for the future.
Evenmore
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Even more
,
people
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think that
history
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have not
value
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a value
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able
subject
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rather than others and it is
waste
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a waste
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of
the
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time
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because
children
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spend most of
the
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their
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study
time
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spend on
learn
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learning
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their
history
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.
for example
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, a survey conducted by BBC news channel
it
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showed that Japan remove their
history
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subject
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in school and university
children
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get more marks in each
subject
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. In my opinion,
History
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is important for
children
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but they should less
time
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spend on the historical rather than
others
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on others
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. They can learn science and computer
subject
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because it is more valuable for the future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Subjective interpretations
  • Biases
  • Critical thinking
  • Analytical skills
  • Economic depressions
  • Human behavior
  • Modern skill sets
  • Technological advancements
  • Current technologies
  • Future skills
  • Political context
  • Cultural heritage
  • Indispensable
  • Valuable lessons
  • Decision making
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